Off to war mom
Well ,my son is going to war .I can't believe he got chosen. When i tried to talk to the people who chose him, they said that he was their strongest fighter. They also said that i wasn't the only one who was going through this ,they sent ten other guys to war to .So i went back home i noticed something that i never noticed before, what if he does not come back oh no .Then i went to his room .I talked to him about doing that he said he thought about it to but when he told the guy that said to go to war they said no and that he needed to fight.Then we talked about what we were going to do for the three more days he was here .The idea came up to do something like a farewell party but we didn't have any money.We decided to wake up early and go ride the two horses down to the lake take a swim then go home and eat lunch. The next day we would invite the whole family over then cook for them.Then we would let them stay over night .Then when the truck came to pick him up we would all be there to say good-bye and hope for the best.The next day we woke up at 6:00 in the morning,we brushed the horses feed them a carrot or two{most likely a whole garden full} on the way there we started to talk about things such as why they chose.And what we were going to do until they picked him.We were going to open a small business to get the money we needed for the stupid taxes on the tea and sugar.Then it all winds up as money for the red coats weapons.Then we talked about the Boston Massacre.We both thought about the dude that fired.I mean what kind of knuckle head would think that hold your fire could sound like fire.When we got there it didn't work out because over night it was cold so it froze over.
day 2:The next day the house was full of people .We had fun at first talking and catching up with family members.In fact we had so much fun we forgot to cook.So while i was cooking i felt someone by me it was my cousin Joe bob.He wanted to give me something.It was the book Common Sense by Thomas Paine.We started to talk about it.We said things like yeah I've heard it was pretty much common sense .That was about all though because no one really read it yet .Then the food was ready.Man was it good we had vegetable stew except without carrots cause of a certain issue with the horses.
DAY 3.Farewell goodbye happy trails we all cried as he got into the truck. Then he yelled out these last three days were the best mom!!!!!!!!Every one waved .Then when we got in the house every one was crying while they packed,Then some dude busted in the door and said The Declaration of independence is gonna be written. They have just decided to in the old court house .
DAY 3.Farewell goodbye happy trails we all cried as he got into the truck. Then he yelled out these last three days were the best mom!!!!!!!!Every one waved .Then when we got in the house every one was crying while they packed,Then some dude busted in the door and said The Declaration of independence is gonna be written. They have just decided to in the old court house .
1 comments:
Not bad Alex! Make sure you use correct capitalization, especially on "I". Also, separate your paragraphs when you move to a new topic. Punctuation is also key, specifically when using dialogue between characters. 95%
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